tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5436594134452465949.post8523164498769642073..comments2023-05-26T05:17:40.649-07:00Comments on tell-tale heart: iseeyoupaintedyoursoulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15907622265836724138noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5436594134452465949.post-66195729414406238432008-11-14T10:52:00.000-08:002008-11-14T10:52:00.000-08:00"lights playingwith the tones of your voice"I like..."lights playing<BR/>with the tones of your voice"<BR/>I like those lines; the interaction of sight and soungd..<BR/>Also, "how i and time would crawl to reach" - even just for the sound (and feel) of it. But the relationship/comparison of "i" and "time" - so true.Flower Of Edohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12349390164179787355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5436594134452465949.post-51355561103526266062008-11-14T08:58:00.000-08:002008-11-14T08:58:00.000-08:00LOVE this line:(rippling love-lightslike eyes that...LOVE this line:<BR/><BR/>(rippling love-lights<BR/>like eyes that are full)<BR/><BR/>uniquely written...matches the feel & message of the poem.iseeyoupaintedyoursoulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15907622265836724138noreply@blogger.com